Okay, I know I just said I was going to withold criticism, but what the hell B3

Okay left half = good, the shirt folds are nice the hair is good, his head looks a little small, but I think thats due to the amount of hair he has which is OK

Right half = The fold at the bottom of his shirt looks wrong, it appears that there is wind blowing (from the looks of his hair) so the shirt shouldn't be sticking to him unless he coated himsef in honey beforehand B3 basically, the shirt should be blowing out to the right.

His hips look too small for his shoulders/upper body, and I don't think you were going for the creepy weightlifter look xD I'm also having a bit of trouble figuring where the lightings coming from, I'm guessing the front, but you haven't really shaded very much at all xD Though the parts you have, do look good.

There that's my 2 cents, hope it helps ya B3

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IT DEFINITELY HELPED. XD THANKS!

I do need to work on shading OTL LMAO. <3

And yes D= I seem to have a harbl problem with waists-and-down kinda stuff because JCKLSDJ IDK. O__O I just need to study moar XDD HAHAHAHA~ <3

And you're right! I didn't notice that LMAO. Thank you XD <3

Thanks sooo much ;A; *glomple*

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Well I'm glad I could help :3

Hah, you and me both need a bit moar studying time down there xD

But xD anytime, prince 8D

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I agree, but all in all this is still AWSOME!!!

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T-Thank you? <3

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I really like the detail you put in your pictures, very nice ^^

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Thanks ^^

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You are very welcome^^

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Chur welcome lovies ^^

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